Saturday, July 02, 2005

Fantasy World


Take my hand and come with me
come explore my dreams
Be anyone you want to be
and anything you feel

We'll be the puffy clouds
and float in the sky
We'll be the tiny raindrops
and soak everything dry

We'll be the sparkling sun
and fill the world with light
We'll be the shining stars
and glow through the night

We'll plunge into the sea
and swim to the ocean floor
We'll ride the frosty waves
and kiss the sea shore

We'll become the wind
and sway with the trees
We'll be the leaves and flowers
and blow with the breeze

We'll be the desert sand
and build castles of our own
We'll be the mighty mountains
and don a cloak of snow

Step into my fantasy world
forget about the rest
Let my dreams free your soul
and fill you up with zest

31 comments:

SmartOxymoron said...

[Eyes wide]You wrote that? Whats your phone number again?
[Eyes wide for prev post as well, but I was left speechless as well. Im tying to decide if youre not actually me.]

SmartOxymoron said...

And I was First here. Havent won many competitions before... whats the prize for winning this one? Your phone number?
[Im going to add your phone number to the list of three things I want most in life.]

Mirage said...

Umm I wasn't aware there was a competition so there arn't any prizes! Maybe next time k sweetie?! ;)

Oh and my phone number isnt worth so much so redo ur list!

Man with no Name said...

Somehow Ur poem reminded me of "Like a bridge over troubled waters" by S & G

milo said...

m already lost in dat frame of urs!! wat a beauty!!!!

SmartOxymoron said...

Im not sure if youre right, but I'll take your word for it. Btw, I just noticed your new photo... nice.

Smartalec said...

bravo bravo!
u sure are one helluva poetess;)!

@smartoxymoron
lol! a cool way to get a gal's phone number!!

desperado said...

well beautiful post
the pic just aptly describes the theme.

n wht follows it is just superb.
hey mirage dont write such brilliant stuff gal
u make other people like me sound kiddish....

waitin for more such writins

desperado said...

and ya i missed a thing
im ready to take ur hand n explore ur dreams....:)

anuj said...

hmmmmm, WE ........hmmmmmmm....Whats up gal. And moreover whats up dhruv ??

something ?????? whatever....

Really nice post. U r a poet girl. U got evrything inside u on to the paper. Now all u got to do is find the one to be WE, & then exlplore ur dreams. Best of luck. Cheers.

amod!! said...

i'm wondering what happens inside the psyche which metamorphoses a person to become a poet??
never ever any such thing happened to me.....*sigh*
coming back to point....the pic was wonderful..may b i'll make it my wallpaper and whattttta poem gurl!! surely take my hand...

Mirage said...

@manwithnoname: That's one great song man and I doubt if my poem is anywhere close to it!

@milo: thnks yaar!! :)

@soxy: You're so gullible!!

@smartalec: *bow* thanku, thanku thanku!

@dhruv: gosh man read ur poems before praising mine! Theyre awesome! Oh and, to 'explore my dreams' u gotta join the queue!! ;)

@anuj: man i sure hope I go from 'I' to 'We' soon enuf!! ;)

@amod: Acc to Yates, a famous poet, "when u quarrel wid urself, u make poetry"...!!
Neway thanx man! and i like the pic a lot too! u can chk out webshots.com for more of such gr8 pics

D'yer Mak'er said...

i'd love to feel you in your dreams miss illusionist!...but i fear what if i don't understand 'em...coz happens so often...they don't seem to understand n' appreciate your dreams....i guess that the common stuff between your dreams n' your regrets...they're just like your finger prints....they're truly yours!..nobody else can own 'em..even if you want or not.

Mirage said...

@stranger's inc: Yep no one else can own them...but i aint selling them, i'm sharing!
And as far as understanding and appreciating them is concerned, anything's possible in dreamland! And its my dream and I'll make sure that you feel at home! :)

nin said...

I want to take ur hand...and...
want to explore the world....along with you...
lovely poem...
beautiful....(if u haven't copied from somewhere else....dont mind...joking)
take care...

Kroopa Shah (Kr00pz) said...

That is beautiful, keep it going!!

Mirage said...

@avik: Oh no its very original!! And thnx for dropping by! :)

@kroopa: Will do ma'am! :)

nin said...

Hi Mirage...
thanks for visiting my site.....
if u like it or not pls let me know...
if u have any suggestion pls tell me...
i have just started blogging...
thanks again..
take care...

anubhav said...

Nice poem ..especially the last three paras, what a flow...

and seeing the long queue:D...i'll rather sit back and enjoy ur poems through your blog if u dont mind sharing them...

Mirage said...

@avik: sure man, anytime! :)

@anubhav: hehe of course i will! But u know i'm pretty surprised at the response too! Didnt think any1 wud give it a 2nd glance! thnx anyway man!

amod!! said...

lol..lol..you've already got so many guys 'taking' your hand...do let me know when u r free!

Primalsoup said...

Hey thats nice. Has the makings of some mush gush song I think! :) Thanks for coming by my Blog! :)

Mirage said...

@amod: I'll have to check my schedule...!

@primalsoup: I doubt that...bt thnx neway

manuscrypts said...

*sigh* the post doesnt remotely live up to the url :D

Mr. Maverick said...

If I start a band, you will be the lyricist ;-)

Mirage said...

@manuscrypt: Ok now is the new one apt?!

@mediocre: Cool! When dyu start?!

hit said...

hi,wats your name?other than mirage?

pills said...

hey mirage... yesterday i was looking at pile-of-crap ... couldn't get to your blog :( ... just came to know about life-head-on... hey but i liked the prev one.. pile-of-crap is fundoo URL... :-)

lets see if i can flick it ;)

Mirage said...

@hit: Shhh its a secret! ;)

@pills: lol! Its all yours man... :)

shrek said...

nice. are you back in delhi now or still in shimla, then?
also that was a nice quote about life that you posted(too lazy to go back and comment on that post :D )
if u get a chance look at a couple of poems my friend posted at www.livejournal.com/~dh_moi

MS said...

firstly,I enjoyed it very,very rythmic,nicely said,with good structure.Most of the beauties of the nature are used very beautifully. ;)
Dream and fantasy r good and make life bearable.But if u become involved with it and obsessivly swim in it,the result would be a disaster really.I can feel it right now.