I reside in the State of Lonliness
I live with a box of broken dreams
A bride at the altar
A dethroned Queen
The one left out in the rain
Like a meek goat following her shepherd
hoping to find my meadow
I tread towards my illusory heaven,
I follow him
lost in a hypnotic trance
The venom of love
rushes through my veins
Can feel it absorbing my soul
Fading truth, diminishing life,
An undead corpse
That’s what’s become of me.
I live with a box of broken dreams
A bride at the altar
A dethroned Queen
The one left out in the rain
Like a meek goat following her shepherd
hoping to find my meadow
I tread towards my illusory heaven,
I follow him
lost in a hypnotic trance
The venom of love
rushes through my veins
Can feel it absorbing my soul
Fading truth, diminishing life,
An undead corpse
That’s what’s become of me.
17 comments:
Time for chilled beer. Really.
Intense. You express your feelings too good buddy. Absolutely brilliant.........
Hugz
Ashu
Am left astounded! That was fabolously put..Sublte yet so commanding!
blogrolled you!
Fantastic!! loved it!!
@Rohit: Cool...kab pila raha hai!?
@Ashu: Thanks ashu :) *hugs back*
@Annie: Really? I wish others would understand the subtle gestures too :). Thanks for blogrolling me.
@Stone: Thankyou :)
price love demands...is it??
People who shud understand usually don't or pretend not to..that is the irony.
hiya blogrolled ya!!!
nice one..i particularly like the line "the venom of love"..
love is surely venomous..it bites u like the snake,and then, even if the bite fades,the venom remains...it makes u feverish n weak...ask me-i'm in the same state whenever i meet the snake..lol
THE VENOM OF LOVE...
Triplesix made a great point there... That is quite a pithy description of love there... I for one am a considerable way to being a cynic, from the romantic I was years ago...
Nice thoughts Mirage!
Absolutely wonderful!!
great blog over here...u r being linked:)
@dhruv: Yep...mehenga pad raha hai!
@Ashu: Thanks :)
@Nika: :P True...
@Rahul: Hmm...good decision to leave romance behind :)
@Jeya: Thanks Jeya :)
Hey Mirage
Some problem in my blogger profile. You can either bookmark or blogroll this :
ashusdiary.blogspot.com
Cheerio
Ashu
Abeeeyn yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar... ye kya hai yaaaaaaaaaarn
@Ashu: Oh cool...thanks.
@"anshuman das": What are u doin here?? This is not the place for u! Fake-named psycho!
thats heart-breaking but the words are lovely...keep going...!
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