Sunday, May 13, 2007

Banished


A list of don'ts
is what I get from you
I earn your disapproval
in everything I do
You say the harshest things
in jest
I'm trying to see beyond it
but can't protest
My vision's blurred
can't see the line
Between compromise
and sacrifice
Tryin' to make you happy
but you always get annoyed
Pushing me away
making your life devoid
of me
What did I do?
Where did I go wrong?
Where'd the love go?
Can't figure it out
Just askin you
to take me along
Don't walk away
just take me along...

25 comments:

Rohit Talwar said...

Er, what's up?

Irresistible Desires.. said...

take me along too..
awesome..
we share names eh..!!
jus d spellings r different..
Miraj here..
amazing..i loved this..

Keshi said...

wow!

Keshi.

Shy said...

very wow-ly written

desperado said...
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desperado said...

okie okie i will :P

Smartalec said...

and that's the course life takes...

nice pic to complement the text!

Mirage said...

@Rohit: Er...the roof?!

@Miraj: Wow, my name twin! ;) Thanks fr visiting!

@keshi: Thanks :)

@Shy: Hehe...thanks, very wow-ly said :)

@Dhruv: hehehehe!! Kaha chalna hai?

@steve: Sure does... thanks :)

miz4ever said...

wow!

nemesis said...

me likey :)

Rohit Talwar said...

So what's the color like?

deepti said...

A good poem in terms of the expression of the emotion but the rhetoric questions that you seem to be asking hold a sadness, y?

Saurabh said...

so emotional, specially when you are expecting and you don't get it...

also read neha's poem yesterday... why everyone so into writing sad stuff... i don't know because all i have done is written sad...

MS said...

nice, but y begging for love really? I cant understand the one way road

Mirage said...

@miz4ever: :) Thanks

@Neha: thakee :D

@Rohit: Pretty dull...!

@deepti: I guess sadness creeps in, in the most unexpected places... but then again, i guess it isnt so unexpected after all :)

@saurabh: I guess gloom's in the air...!

@MS: Sighhh...neither can I! :(

the Monk said...

Chin up, girl...watch for the silver lining... :)

deepti said...

Where r u sweets? its been long...
Aap to eid ka chaand ho gayi hain?

Amod said...
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Amod said...

v v v good! Is it pertinent or a figment of imagination?

Stone said...

Chin up lil girl!!!

Shy said...

Its been ages..where are u =)

Mirage said...

@varun: :) Will do...

@deepti: Hehe...bas yahi samajh lijiye! :) dnt worry, will be bak soon.

@Amod: Umm...whaddya think?

@Stone: Thanks :)

@Shy: Will be back girl, tied up with a lotta work these days. :|

Anonymous said...

madamji, what a poetry.

Ginger Girl said...

lovely.

Wanderer said...

too vulnerable.. maybe that's what's wrong!