Tuesday, March 21, 2006

Don't...

Dont look into my eyes
I cannot meet your gaze

Dont take my hands in yours
I cannot keep my promise

Dont hold me in your arms
I cannot stay forever

Dont whisper my name
I cannot hear your voice

Dont caress my face
I cannot feel your touch

Dont tell me you love me
I'm not destined to love...

27 comments:

The Phoenix said...

Cold,unfeeling...numb

Be careful.

Cynicism is the refuge of the damned.

Stone said...

hmm..all well??

Hazel Dream said...

How honest and feminish ... Eel of our existence slippery and selfish

D'yer Mak'er said...

Dont tell me you love me
I'm not destined to love...


...maybe i agree... for that's the fate of the angels!

ps. love's too small a word for 'em.... they deserve a lot more than that!

johney said...

By all that was once holy, it is one of most touching poem I have ever read in a long time.

Random said...

dont despair..life is beautiful

amazing poem

Mirage said...

@phoenix: Its less painful...

@stone: It is now

@dream merchant: Just slipped out of my hands...

@d'yer mak'er: Sigh...thankyou

@johney: Thnkyou so much

@ravin: I missed the beauty of life...by choice

TripleSix said...

i like the last stanza....

though pecculiar,but very much coincidental to some extent..

hahaha

i like the image too

desperado said...

why?

First Rain said...


Maybe now not destined for love,
But love will find ye still,
For when destiny acts like a rogue,
Love can stay destiny's wayward will.


Trust me. Never say die. *hugs*

the Monk said...

well, that was quite a poem...chill, girl, things will be fine. keep faith, I guess.

cherubic_chipmunk said...

whoa wat a poem megz!!i presume 'tis fictional so i aint gonna say nething more...but truly,wat a poem!!

anuj said...

everyones entitled for evrythng .. its jst tht time is not wid u.

so jst relax .. u will get over this d next day .. and thn u will feel tht i sure m entitled for love .. i mean why shud u be .. why shudnt ne1 be . so gal jst let it go . take a *sign* & move on .

hear this ::

Every day here you come walking
I hold my tongue, I don't do much talking
You say you're happy and you're doin' fine
Well go ahead, baby, I got plenty of time
Sad eyes never lie

Well for awhile I've been watching you steady
Ain't gonna move 'til you're good and ready
But I know pretty soon you'll be walkin' this way

Baby don't you know he don't care
Don't you know that he've been there
Well if something in the air feels a little unkind
Don't worry darling, it'll slip your mind

( hehe replaced I by HE :p ) .

so cool down . thanda thanda cool cool . are whts milo doin .. she shud be doin all this .. aise frndz ke hote hue bhi how can u be said haan . not done .

Mirage said...

@nika: thnx! :)

@dhruv: Everything doesnt have to have a reason...I just know...

@FirstRain: Tht was beautiful... thankyou so much.

@varun: Hmm...thnx neway

@arvind: Thanx buddy!

@anuj: Wow! what a comment! and what a song! Dost ho to aise!! :)Khush kar diya yaar! Milo has competition! ;)Thnx buddy!

Mr. Maverick said...

This was the 'Dont dos'.

When are the 'Please Dos' coming? That will be of some help ;-)

Arun

Ajay said...

how very true
nice poem

Mirage said...

@arun: Do the dont's! ;)

@ajay: thankyou...n thnx fr visiting

MS said...

sorry I dont like it.
we have all those abilities and can do anything,not wanting to for whatever reason is sth else.
You can say I dont love but u cannot say I am not destined to love.

Rohit Talwar said...

Sad lines. Is everything's cool?

!xobile said...

oye!
poyum shoyum
nice yaar...

badi senti see hai yar!

zxcv said...

y look only at gloomy things in life? again and agian?
giving u an opportunity to look at the +ves, i've taged you :)

Bhim said...

I've been through rough times myself, there have been times when I posted very gloomy and sometimes dark stuff on my blog, but I assure you, this is a phase, it will pass.

As the proverb goes, time heals all.

I hope there was not much meaning into the words, just stuff you found touching and posted on your blog.

Arz000n said...

Dont tell me you love me
I'm not destined to love...

Y everyone is running away from love these days....hmmm..I suspect tiz coz of bad weather or that nucelar pact signed b/w India and Umm-ricca....
:( :(

Mirage said...

@MS: Its impossible not to love... but destiny does play an imp role in it...and in my case, well...!

@Rohit: Cold is more like it!

@Mr.X: Senti see nahi, senti hi hai!

@zxcv: I have a good mind to tear u apart! >:[

@Bhim: Time...and time again... :)

@Arz000n: Oh wow! Ur a genius! :D

Prmod Bafna said...

Very beautifully delivered! Don't know if its real or not.. but the apparent poignancy just shines through.. cheers :)

MS said...

not very impossible,but yeah,life does play an imp role,yet it is up to us to love or not to love,and apparently u have chosen not to.

dwaipayan said...

sometimes i just feel exactl like this....