Saturday, November 18, 2006

Abandoned

Illusive reality
Deceptive truths
Honest lies
Blissful miseries

False reflections
In those eyes
Fake affection
Phony smiles

Shattered myths
Destroyed fantasies
A gush of blood
Over frozen lives

Dazed, confused
Paralyzed by fate
Screaming in silence
Choking with hate

Broken. Wrecked. Scarred.
For life.
This is for my best friend. Take care sweetie. God bless you.

21 comments:

Gaurav Alagh said...

Shattered myths
Destroyed fantasies
A gush of blood
Over frozen lives

Dazed, confused
Paralyzed by fate
Screaming in silence
Choking with hate

Broken. Wrecked. Scarred.
For life.


like this part the most.... and secondly about ur comment onmy Teenpatti dot com.. tht was just a wild and confused thought.. u c .. as my Blogg title suggests.. BEWILDERED... meanwhile.. Do i by any chance knw u?

Anonymous said...

desperado here ~~~

"Broken. Wrecked. Scarred.
For life."

......n i hope u somehow dont let tht happen

Rohit Talwar said...

Relax, girl!

Smile. :)

Rohit Talwar said...

And don't let it affect you a lot.

SmartOxymoron said...

Plastic flowers for the friend. With all my plastic love.

Mirage said...

@gaurav: Thanks :) N no u do not know me i dont knw u. Thnx fr visiting!

@dhruv: I won't. :)

@rohit: it won't affect me, but i'm more concerned abt it affecting my closest pal. she dznt deserve this. Bt thnx! :)

@SOxy: Oh my god, look who's bak! Howve u been?

Random said...

how nice to able to be able to turn to a friend in times of trouble.

Z000nie said...

I'm used to all this ..... :)

Shy said...

lovely. ur poetry is so real. friends are the biggest assets of life

deepti said...

wel the numbness is still to settle in and once it settles everything will be cold n the fite wil die a silent serene death...

Mirage said...

@rash: :) I'm glad i can be of some help.

@z00nie: 'm gettin used to all dis...

@shy: thanks shy, n ur right. Friends really are treasures and if someone else tries to hurt them, then God help em!

@deepti: I hope so... :) Thanks for dropping by!

johney said...

Some heading for your blog

'hurting phrases'
Phrases from the deep well of wisdom
Words of the powerful mind
Spoken too were these words.

Keshi said...

and it feels like this is for me too...

Keshi.

Prashant said...

good compo
keep it up.....

deepti said...

wasnt expecting a thanx 4 that comment... wish it nvr happes, the warmth of the fire inside keeps the world going dear... let it burn...

Mirage said...

@johney: thnx man! thts really nice of u... :)

@keshi: :) take care

@prashant: thanks...n thnx fr dropping by!

@deepti: thnks...agen! :)

miz4ever said...

Nice blog!

Ajay said...

Wow. too less words. too much meaning.
starting a new genre of poetry ?
lol

Rohit Talwar said...

*drums*

Update Alert!

x-(

preetha said...

that was again amazing.
you bring out the emotions soo well!!!

i hope u wont mind me linking ur blog in mine..

preetha

nemesis said...

i like.... :)
strong words