A list of don'ts
is what I get from you
I earn your disapproval
in everything I do
You say the harshest things
in jest
I'm trying to see beyond it
but can't protest
My vision's blurred
can't see the line
Between compromise
and sacrifice
Tryin' to make you happy
but you always get annoyed
Pushing me away
making your life devoid
of me
What did I do?
Where did I go wrong?
Where'd the love go?
Can't figure it out
Just askin you
to take me along
Don't walk away
just take me along...
24 comments:
Er, what's up?
take me along too..
awesome..
we share names eh..!!
jus d spellings r different..
Miraj here..
amazing..i loved this..
wow!
Keshi.
very wow-ly written
okie okie i will :P
and that's the course life takes...
nice pic to complement the text!
@Rohit: Er...the roof?!
@Miraj: Wow, my name twin! ;) Thanks fr visiting!
@keshi: Thanks :)
@Shy: Hehe...thanks, very wow-ly said :)
@Dhruv: hehehehe!! Kaha chalna hai?
@steve: Sure does... thanks :)
me likey :)
So what's the color like?
A good poem in terms of the expression of the emotion but the rhetoric questions that you seem to be asking hold a sadness, y?
so emotional, specially when you are expecting and you don't get it...
also read neha's poem yesterday... why everyone so into writing sad stuff... i don't know because all i have done is written sad...
nice, but y begging for love really? I cant understand the one way road
@miz4ever: :) Thanks
@Neha: thakee :D
@Rohit: Pretty dull...!
@deepti: I guess sadness creeps in, in the most unexpected places... but then again, i guess it isnt so unexpected after all :)
@saurabh: I guess gloom's in the air...!
@MS: Sighhh...neither can I! :(
Chin up, girl...watch for the silver lining... :)
Where r u sweets? its been long...
Aap to eid ka chaand ho gayi hain?
v v v good! Is it pertinent or a figment of imagination?
Chin up lil girl!!!
Its been ages..where are u =)
@varun: :) Will do...
@deepti: Hehe...bas yahi samajh lijiye! :) dnt worry, will be bak soon.
@Amod: Umm...whaddya think?
@Stone: Thanks :)
@Shy: Will be back girl, tied up with a lotta work these days. :|
madamji, what a poetry.
lovely.
too vulnerable.. maybe that's what's wrong!
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