Night.
She’s black, bewitching, beautiful
Draped in a star studded cloak
Adorning the moon on her forehead
And a grey veil of clouds
Hiding dark secrets
Within herself
A Temptress
Casting her spell on the world
A Seductress
With many lovelorn lovers
A Warrior
Dangerous, when provoked
A Goddess
To be worshipped by us all
She’s dark...
She’s Light.
19 comments:
Here is how my car pool mate would have responded to this poetry..
"Abe Abe Abe Abe Abe yaaaaar(n) kya(n) hai(n) yaaar(n)... kuch samajh nahi(n) aaya(n) yaaar(n)... abeeeeeeee"
she is a mystery..her enigma untold..
she is ubiquitous everywhere i behold..
she is unfaithful..soon she would be gone..
the orgasmic darkness..marks the dawn..
hey, here after a long time.. :-) so hw u doin? and a nice piece of art here.. :-)
@Arun: Tumhare saare friends tumhare jaise hi hain kya?!
@shashi: Wow! That's awesome man! Thanx! :)
@jithu: heyy buddy nice to see ya here! I'm doin good man, shifted base to mumbai now! :) Whts up wid u?
nicely written...
"she's dark..she's light"...
contradicting...
wat r u contradictin at?
Nights in Mumbai are particularly beautiful with those illuminated skyscrapers!! I remember hanging in the balcony every night to see the unending queue of cars crawling on the streets and those tall buildings with every room lit up brightly.. I love night!!!
ummm enjoyin mumbai nights :)
nice to see beautiful words here again after a long time
havent read a poem from u for ages. nice to read one again. what wld u like to be? temptress, seductress, warrior, goddess or all of the above?
@nika: Guess??!! ;)
@amod: yeaa, mumbai nights are every bit of wht i wrote...u can imagine why i'm enjoying here so much!
@dhruv: Yep! Thanks buddy! :)
@rash: Hmm, lets see...all that and maybe more! ;)
can't...
be specific...i have become more absent minded now a days....
lol
the NIGHT is a mystery in itself ....
whtevr is dars is a mystery .. theres alwyz a fair chance of getting lost .. u have to depnd on ur instincts completely ...
I wonder wht makes u write abt the night .. well it comes to mind though .. :D
nice poem buddy
tc.
anuj
Love it
Hey! How do you get so many comments on your blog post?? Would you like to exchange links...like blogroll???
"She’s black, bewitching, beautiful
Draped in a star studded cloak"
these r gr8 lines.describing NIGHT as a woman.
good one.
oh cool! me too shifted base; to bangalore :-). so started working or studying?
I'm in love with this one... reallllly beautiful praise for the night... good work again, as always;-)
@prateek: yea sure dude...and ppl comment coz i comment on their page. :)
@Ostracised: Thanks man, n keep dropping by.
@Jithu: studying man, working me abhi time hai!
@hotice: hey nice to see u back after such a long hiatus! n thanks buddy! :)
She's dark.. She's light.. I raise the same question as 666's... :O
"She’s dark...
She’s Light."
v.true.. U spoke my hrt out!!!
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