A stream of loveyou came gushing
and then, froze
Hadn't even touched you yet
and you became cold
so cold
Wish I could melt you somehow
but seems my warmth wasn't enough
to seep through
Bound by promises,
enclosed by choices
that never existed
Waiting for the sun
to rise in this winter desert,
and shine on you
Waiting for you,
and lingering on
for eternity...
21 comments:
beautiful lines mirage
these lines would surely melt anyone
waiting for more such words
amen....thats a wonderful poem.
Profound!
Awesome lines there Mirage!!!
Nice....
@dhruv: I'm not too sure abt that... but thnx anyway :)
@ravin: Thnx buddy
@stone: :| Thanx man, tho some people don't think so...
@arz000n: :) Thnx
Arre! Pyaar vyaar ho gaya hai kya?
Arun
WOW so beautiful Mirage!!
Keshi.
now whos in love haan !!
hope ur hope is materialized soon :-)
Thanx man, tho some people don't think so...
Hmm... i also agree with the person for whom (I am sure its a 'he') you wrote this (poetry). This is a boring poetry to say the least.
And as you have clearly seen that my taste matches very much with 'his' taste, make sure you get my approval before you post anything to impress him
;-) ;-)
@keshi: Thnx kesh!
@anuj: Love? Where when how?! ;)
@jithu: thnx buddy...i hope so too!
@mr. maverick: Hehe, nice try sweetie! but ur efforts to annoy me have turned sour! As for ur 'approval', i just have to say... yaaaawwwwwn!!
beautiful lines.......loved it all.. n' i'd say brilliant to say the least to what you wrote..... i wish words could have said what love couldn't....
i wish you happiness come to you soon.... i wish you to terminate your wait soon.
god bless n' take care.
wats goin on in here??? whos impressed n whos nt??? do u mind if i decide;-) well hp dat cloud cms in here soon..
Well then... 'he' is never gonna be impressed with your 'booo you have left me coooold' poetry ;-)
All the best nevertheless! Keep trying.
Arun
@milo: hehehe!! ;)
@arun: What makes you think I've written it for someone? And that too to 'impress him'!?? I have better ways to impress people! ;)
hmmm...
"to rise in this winter desert,
and shine on u"
shine on u....shine on u...sry,this line reminded me of floyd,and see,wat a coincidence, "high hopes" is playin...wat a song!!!
i liked ur poem..n i like tht new image of "illusion"...
mirage - I have better ways to impress people! - I would like to explore these ways.
triplesix - You like the new image? Thanks ;-).
Arun
@nika: thnx hun, tho the credit fr the pic goes to arun who never misses the oppurtunity to alter my blog! neway, i liked it too, so thnx arun!
@arun: Are you sure???! ;)
I really like it.the love that is frozen,the sun that hasnt risen,and u who hasnt enough warmth to make the eternity....
beautiful! heartfelt feelings have been expressed so well! mesmerizing stuff!!
wow :)
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