Time’s playing games
And it seems I’m losing
It was right there
Wonder where it went
Wonder if it will return
Years gone by, in a flash
Hours turn to minutes
And minutes to moments
Moments, fly away…
Rushing by like that
You’d think it has a destination to reach
A deadline to meet
A race to win…
Does it have an end?
Did it have a beginning?
I’m trying hard to catch up,
Running, gasping for breath
But it never slows down,
The closer I try to get,
The more I lag behind
And I’m losing
Against time...
And it seems I’m losing
It was right there
Wonder where it went
Wonder if it will return
Years gone by, in a flash
Hours turn to minutes
And minutes to moments
Moments, fly away…
Rushing by like that
You’d think it has a destination to reach
A deadline to meet
A race to win…
Does it have an end?
Did it have a beginning?
I’m trying hard to catch up,
Running, gasping for breath
But it never slows down,
The closer I try to get,
The more I lag behind
And I’m losing
Against time...
23 comments:
me too .
take some rest .. normalise ur breath .. run with full force ... who knows u might beat it .. best of luk .
hey! chill yar..these r d testin times..b slow n steady n enjoy every moment..dnt wry:-)
stop running the race...
stop and you lose.. keep running..stay tuned. I took rest and I lost a lot..don't want you to repeat the mistake..
after a long time...beautiful lines u wrote
maybe become like a long distance runner....slow n controlled...pushing only when it is required...not exerting much
everyone has to run dis race
@anuj: I dont want to beat it... but I want to run at the same pace so I dont lose sight of it...
@milo: i am slow, but nt steady!
@varun: I'll get run over if I stop...
@amod: thnx man...but I'm tired of running...
@dhruv: Great advice man, but if i slow down now, I'll never make it till the end...
nice poem,
when for the first time we buy the watch in the pic we think;we r going to capture the time unaware of the fact that we have been captured ourselves already.
Mirage it looks like u wrote this for me...it's very relevant to the situation Im in at the moment...I have tears right now...thanks girl, so beautiful!
Keshi.
From a song:
As we are rushing life,
Life is rushing by.
Time doesn't really go anywhere, though it never seems to run at pace you want it to. Maybe the trick is to follow the rhythm time sets and not what we want, like not fight it but go with the flow. Or maybe it's just time for a hot chocolate fudge!
amateurish, but nice!
@MS: Wel said...i guess between us and time, we dont know who's chasing whom...
@keshi: Aw hny, as they say, 'time' heals all!! take care
@First rain: I dont want to fight it, I want it to accompany me as I tread the path of life...wht the heck, i think i'll grab that HCF now! ;)
@vivek: Thnx fr visiting! :)
Lovely write! well the best way to beat time is to take good rest. Ride in, Ride on, Ride out? ;)
Come chat with me for a few hours. You will know how this 'time' thingy works ;)
and dont ya forget to read my post on my new URL! :P
hope it heals the wound....but sometimes the scars hurt more than the wounds...
Keshi.
the poem and the pic.....i can't decide which one is better....man!!!carry on!!
'tis a game aftrall-so take it in ur stride n live evry moment-dont worry abt de consequences coz ultimately u either win de race or u lose it-n de result hardly matters,right?
@xfreax: Riding away! :)
@Arun: oh i cant disagree wid that! ;) n i already read ur post
@keshi: Scars are just there to remind us of what was...
@dwaipayan: *Bow* Thankyou! :)
@arvind: Hmm...i dont know whar matters anymore
Whenever I read something about time, I always remember this lines
Time Time Time
You old Gypsy
Won't you put your caravan down
And rest, just for one day?
yep...and they remain.
Keshi.
You right so beautifully..I loved it..Its not spamming , but I also write a poetry blog and my poems are also similar to yours.
http://varunmayan.blogspot.com
Mirage ur only 20 and u write this kinda stuff? WOW!
Keshi.
@johney: Wow, amazing lines man! Time sure is a gypsy...
@keshi: they heal... :) N I'm 20 and i write like a 16 yr old! ;) Need to improve a HELL lot!
@varunmayan: Would love to read ur poems... Thnx fr dropping by! :)
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