Take my hand and come with me
come explore my dreams
Be anyone you want to be
and anything you feel
We'll be the puffy clouds
and float in the sky
We'll be the tiny raindrops
and soak everything dry
We'll be the sparkling sun
and fill the world with light
We'll be the shining stars
and glow through the night
We'll plunge into the sea
and swim to the ocean floor
We'll ride the frosty waves
and kiss the sea shore
We'll become the wind
and sway with the trees
We'll be the leaves and flowers
and blow with the breeze
We'll be the desert sand
and build castles of our own
We'll be the mighty mountains
and don a cloak of snow
Step into my fantasy world
forget about the rest
Let my dreams free your soul
and fill you up with zest
29 comments:
[Eyes wide]You wrote that? Whats your phone number again?
[Eyes wide for prev post as well, but I was left speechless as well. Im tying to decide if youre not actually me.]
And I was First here. Havent won many competitions before... whats the prize for winning this one? Your phone number?
[Im going to add your phone number to the list of three things I want most in life.]
Umm I wasn't aware there was a competition so there arn't any prizes! Maybe next time k sweetie?! ;)
Oh and my phone number isnt worth so much so redo ur list!
Somehow Ur poem reminded me of "Like a bridge over troubled waters" by S & G
m already lost in dat frame of urs!! wat a beauty!!!!
Im not sure if youre right, but I'll take your word for it. Btw, I just noticed your new photo... nice.
bravo bravo!
u sure are one helluva poetess;)!
@smartoxymoron
lol! a cool way to get a gal's phone number!!
well beautiful post
the pic just aptly describes the theme.
n wht follows it is just superb.
hey mirage dont write such brilliant stuff gal
u make other people like me sound kiddish....
waitin for more such writins
and ya i missed a thing
im ready to take ur hand n explore ur dreams....:)
hmmmmm, WE ........hmmmmmmm....Whats up gal. And moreover whats up dhruv ??
something ?????? whatever....
Really nice post. U r a poet girl. U got evrything inside u on to the paper. Now all u got to do is find the one to be WE, & then exlplore ur dreams. Best of luck. Cheers.
i'm wondering what happens inside the psyche which metamorphoses a person to become a poet??
never ever any such thing happened to me.....*sigh*
coming back to point....the pic was wonderful..may b i'll make it my wallpaper and whattttta poem gurl!! surely take my hand...
@manwithnoname: That's one great song man and I doubt if my poem is anywhere close to it!
@milo: thnks yaar!! :)
@soxy: You're so gullible!!
@smartalec: *bow* thanku, thanku thanku!
@dhruv: gosh man read ur poems before praising mine! Theyre awesome! Oh and, to 'explore my dreams' u gotta join the queue!! ;)
@anuj: man i sure hope I go from 'I' to 'We' soon enuf!! ;)
@amod: Acc to Yates, a famous poet, "when u quarrel wid urself, u make poetry"...!!
Neway thanx man! and i like the pic a lot too! u can chk out webshots.com for more of such gr8 pics
i'd love to feel you in your dreams miss illusionist!...but i fear what if i don't understand 'em...coz happens so often...they don't seem to understand n' appreciate your dreams....i guess that the common stuff between your dreams n' your regrets...they're just like your finger prints....they're truly yours!..nobody else can own 'em..even if you want or not.
@stranger's inc: Yep no one else can own them...but i aint selling them, i'm sharing!
And as far as understanding and appreciating them is concerned, anything's possible in dreamland! And its my dream and I'll make sure that you feel at home! :)
That is beautiful, keep it going!!
@avik: Oh no its very original!! And thnx for dropping by! :)
@kroopa: Will do ma'am! :)
Nice poem ..especially the last three paras, what a flow...
and seeing the long queue:D...i'll rather sit back and enjoy ur poems through your blog if u dont mind sharing them...
@avik: sure man, anytime! :)
@anubhav: hehe of course i will! But u know i'm pretty surprised at the response too! Didnt think any1 wud give it a 2nd glance! thnx anyway man!
lol..lol..you've already got so many guys 'taking' your hand...do let me know when u r free!
Hey thats nice. Has the makings of some mush gush song I think! :) Thanks for coming by my Blog! :)
@amod: I'll have to check my schedule...!
@primalsoup: I doubt that...bt thnx neway
*sigh* the post doesnt remotely live up to the url :D
If I start a band, you will be the lyricist ;-)
@manuscrypt: Ok now is the new one apt?!
@mediocre: Cool! When dyu start?!
hi,wats your name?other than mirage?
hey mirage... yesterday i was looking at pile-of-crap ... couldn't get to your blog :( ... just came to know about life-head-on... hey but i liked the prev one.. pile-of-crap is fundoo URL... :-)
lets see if i can flick it ;)
@hit: Shhh its a secret! ;)
@pills: lol! Its all yours man... :)
nice. are you back in delhi now or still in shimla, then?
also that was a nice quote about life that you posted(too lazy to go back and comment on that post :D )
if u get a chance look at a couple of poems my friend posted at www.livejournal.com/~dh_moi
firstly,I enjoyed it very,very rythmic,nicely said,with good structure.Most of the beauties of the nature are used very beautifully. ;)
Dream and fantasy r good and make life bearable.But if u become involved with it and obsessivly swim in it,the result would be a disaster really.I can feel it right now.
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