tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post111943941117960273..comments2023-10-17T14:19:03.361+05:30Comments on Illusions: Its over...Miragehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05789924298694939005noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119633940510476252005-06-24T22:55:00.000+05:302005-06-24T22:55:00.000+05:30If over and out it ever is,What was, will cease to...<I>If over and out it ever is,<BR/>What was, will cease to be,<BR/>What will be, would not be needed,<BR/>So much scarier is eternity.</I><BR/><BR/>Thanks for visiting!First Rainhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17399581277129935484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119619336090770422005-06-24T18:52:00.000+05:302005-06-24T18:52:00.000+05:30@metal: nobody should...@metal: nobody should...Miragehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05789924298694939005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119618603105129502005-06-24T18:40:00.000+05:302005-06-24T18:40:00.000+05:30what would be interesting is if this poem had had ...what would be interesting is if this poem had had a sequel! anyhow, the best part nobody would give a shit either way.meTaLhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06845829525123419252noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119537943447881792005-06-23T20:15:00.000+05:302005-06-23T20:15:00.000+05:30@smartalec: thnx for the appreciation man! But wha...@smartalec: thnx for the appreciation man! But what is it with liquor!? i dont want ppl to think i'm suicidal AND have a drinking problem! ;)<BR/><BR/>@dhruv: lol! i wont man! dont have a gun!<BR/><BR/>@maninthebox: yea u cud put it that way. but "it's" includes a whole lotta stuff i'd like to put an end to...even the bullets!<BR/><BR/>@anuj: Gawwd man chill!! its just a poem! I'm in no hurry to go anywhere! i knw everyome cares and i cant even DREAM of leaving them! bt thnx for ur concern! :)Miragehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05789924298694939005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119514244069049222005-06-23T13:40:00.000+05:302005-06-23T13:40:00.000+05:30Hey !! u there. U alive. Thank god. I just thought...Hey !! u there. U alive. Thank god. I just thought u shooted urselves .From the beginning the poem was very nice but in the end it became scary.<BR/><BR/>"But everything will be<BR/>just the way it was<BR/>and one of them missing<BR/>with not much loss"<BR/><BR/>Thats not exactly true. There r people who care for u. and one day when u will not be there they will miss u.radioheadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13395315639501502469noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119511253420827372005-06-23T12:50:00.000+05:302005-06-23T12:50:00.000+05:30Hey thanks for visiting my blog. And nice poem.And...Hey thanks for visiting my blog. And nice poem.<BR/><BR/>And what are the chances that "its" in the last line might refer to the bullets in the gun?Vikashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14921971185093265245noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119500051741766722005-06-23T09:44:00.000+05:302005-06-23T09:44:00.000+05:30nice one mirage dont know what made u write thiss...nice one mirage <BR/>dont know what made u write this<BR/>sometimes evryone searches the reason for his/her existnce<BR/><BR/>keep the writings comin<BR/>n boy dont shoot urself.....loldesperadohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00481911594136864668noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119463567301112642005-06-22T23:36:00.000+05:302005-06-22T23:36:00.000+05:30atta gal, megha! very well written! but i agree wi...atta gal, megha! very well written! but i agree with anubhav... u cud've added d liquor and still ended with the gun:P! <BR/>and congratz! ur efforts paid off! it sounded gory alright:DSmartalechttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15568978385587285754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119449526981742282005-06-22T19:42:00.000+05:302005-06-22T19:42:00.000+05:30@anubhav: thnx man! Oh and i wouldve added the liq...@anubhav: thnx man! Oh and i wouldve added the liquor part... but i preferred the gun to slow poison!<BR/><BR/>@shaan: nothin specific...i just wanted it to sound kinda gory! >:)Miragehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05789924298694939005noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119445027660271292005-06-22T18:27:00.000+05:302005-06-22T18:27:00.000+05:30mourir !! an intresting topic to write about !!!!!...mourir !! an intresting topic to write about !!!!!!!! <BR/>but made u write abt stickin the gun to skullshaanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03391160775511134460noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7914755.post-1119440339750651632005-06-22T17:08:00.000+05:302005-06-22T17:08:00.000+05:30NICE POEM GIRL..I LOVED THE SECOND PARA THE MOST.....NICE POEM GIRL..<BR/><BR/>I LOVED THE SECOND PARA THE MOST...<BR/><BR/>KEEP THEM COMING..<BR/><BR/>AND YA..HOW ABT ADDING A PARA WITH LIQOUR..MAKES IT FILMI..:Danubhavhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00828947553899660206noreply@blogger.com